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[Sentences order game]

Looks good, though some sentences could be arranged in more than one way. For example, one of my sentences had the phrase "at the moment" in it. I think it was "At the moment I am arranging English grammar."
Problem is this sentence could be properly arranged:
"At the moment I am arranging English grammar."
"I am arranging English grammar at the moment ."
"I at the moment am arranging English grammar."
"I am at the moment arranging English grammar."

Most of the time, context like capitals and punctuation give enough clues, but strict adherence to one form when several could be used could lead to confused users.

A simple fix would be to stick with less complex sentences with no unnecessary clauses or phrases.

An unrelated complaint: The balloons occasionally were "dropped" for what seemed like no reason.

Neither of these issues keep it from being a useful tool though. Good job.

ahtingir responds:

You are right but we have formed as ''At the moment...'' starts with capital A. This is a mixed tense game. We thought sentences can be any form, sometimes time adverbs can be at the beginning ....

Balloons drop because of 25 seconds passes.

Thank you very much for your feedback

[Nyan Cat's Idle Adventure]

I'd like a listing or gallery of rare items

I've been watching for over a half hour now and i've "seen" 5 rare items, but aside from longcat, I haven't actually seen any of them. I've been looking away from the game or getting a drink, etc... So I'd like a listing or even better a gallery showing which rare items I've "seen".

As for the game, I'm enjoying it, but there's really not much to it and the fun aspects of it aren't really yours. You've shown you can program well enough, how about something more complicated that showcases your own creativity and abilities as well as the meme?

Aesica responds:

It seems you've subconsciously recognized one of the reasons I made this; it was a practice project to get me used to working with flash. It is merely paving the way for more complex and (hopefully) more interesting projects. :D

The rare catalog is actually a pretty good idea, but it's not likely to happen because I want to start on the previously mentioned projects instead of pouring more time into this one.